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When thunder rolls,
it’s like hearing someone fall down a flight of stairs
and just when you think they’ve hit the bottom,
they fall even farther
until all that is left are the echoes of their
carelessness
floating away on the wind
and the pain of
mis(ing the top)step.
©2009-2010 *forWinds
:iconforwinds:

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June Prompt #3: "levitation"

It was just thundering outside. :aww:
Dunno if the poem really agrees in number. Help me out if it's not?

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:iconpardonm3:
Ha, that works.
Lovely last line you have there. :peace:
:iconforwinds:
lol thank you. :)

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Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:iconiamphoenixmoth:
that is PERFECT i love it i love it

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Me: IF YOU ARE RELIGIOUS
DO YOU REALIZE THE WHOLE WORLD IS INCESTUOUS
BECAUSE SUPPOSEDLY WE'RE ALL BROTHERS AND SISTERS IN THE EYES OF GOD.
That means every fucking person in the world who is having sex is fucking his or her brother or sister. BRILLIANT.
:iconforwinds:
lol thank you! :)

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Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:iconnesilverwing:
wow. Very effective. yeah, we got caught in that rainstorm. we were in the midst of that thunder, i tell ya'!

i like it. ^_^ 'specially, i think, the last line

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MarchingBand is my life.:heart:
:iconforwinds:
mmm the thunder was awesome. :)

Thank you!

--
Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:iconnesilverwing:
np! :glomp:

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:typerhappy:

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MarchingBand is my life.:heart:

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